A terrible dream!!!

well this is a dream i had on 3-12-12 .... hope you enjoy reading it ....

Dream I had on 3-12-12

A terrible dream!

I had a dream that we was at this lake.

I was trying to help a lady and her kid and boyfriend out with their camera .

They didn't know how to use it that well. They had a kid and they wanted to take family pictures. Then somehow I ended up at her house she was trying the password and it wasn't working. But I had to go so I left out to the car with my brother and his girlfriend we went to some kind of mall. Strange mall as that. Is was huge. And it had green and white walls. I have seen this mall in one of my other dreams before. You would go through this tube elevator one at a time to get up and down. Me and my boyfriend was going back and down out to the car. We went back to the car and Tara and my brother was in there they were freaked out. My brother said,” Someone purposely side swiped up hit our car. They didn't know what to do because Tara was pregnant. We asked them what happened what happened. They said,” Some crazy B***h tried side swiping us. And tried to kill us.” Then they got a text message with a black , and Mexican looking chicks picture that had long message saying you better watch your backs. We got freaked out. So we drove off to go back home. It was taking forever to get home. They were scared and freaked out so bad.

The End,

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well just another dream i had ... let me know what you think /././....

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Yeah dreams are weird but sometimes they have meaning too.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

One scary dream! :-( hope you could sleep after that!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Scary stuff, yet emotionally intense.

[Amila Jay]

What a dream!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Your dreams could be made into a movie. Bad dreams are just stress and worry. A entertaining story. Thank you.
Coyote

[Pencrafter]

You have a great imagination and I like reading your stories. However, poor writing makes it difficult to follow. Dreams can be anything and don't have to make sense. But the word choices and sentence structure should make sense. When you proofread, look for ways to rearrange some words to make it sound more logical. An example, "Strange mall as that" might be changed to "It was a strange mall".

[Chris Yip]

Interesting dream, it got mysterious and intriguing halfway through it. could have expanded into a longer story. Well done.

[Sheena Marie Lee]

thats freaky.....

[CrimsonBlaze]

Oh my gosj...hopefully these dreams don't traumatize you...At least there will be good dreams waiting around the corner

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

whoa........

it's so cool how you can remember your dreams precisely!