My chlid hood memories !!!

its about my child hood memories the best that i could remember them ,,,,, hope you like reading them

My child hood memories!!!!

When I was just a little girl,

I remember having so much fun,

Playing with my friends,

Moving around a lot,

Going to see my Grandpa Little,

And being spoiled by him,

I remember going to his house,

He would always have hot sause and baloney ,

And don't for get the crackers,

Just for me and my dad,

I remember going to family reunions,

having fun,

winning prizes,

I also remember going to the Harritage Pool in Coldwater Mi,

Having a blast,

Being with my family,

And my uncle,

We would have cook outs there ,

And also go swimming,

We liked playing at the play ground,

It was so much fun,

I'd remember having Thanksgiving with lots of family members and friends,

We would go to my favorite Uncles house getting Christmas presents and eating christmas dinner,

Sitting around the table , and eating dinner

I always had cats as my pets,

Going to church,

I remember always fighting with my brother,

I always got angry,

Had fun times in my life,

Until my Uncle and Aunt went to church one after noon on a Wednesday,

Someone came into the church and said your house is on fire,

My Aunt, and Uncle left church,

They seen the burning house,

Their dog Bubba was in there he was a cockier spaniel dog,

It was so sad,

My Aunt had a hart attack when she seen the house on fire,

My uncle not to long after that had a stroke,

Got taken to the hospital,

Then in the hospital he had a mini stroke then a major stroke,

It was really sad to watch him like that,

He stayed alive for a long time after that ,

Died last year 2011,

A vetrin that served in the military,

SO sad to see him go that way,

Everyone loved him so much,

I miss you Uncle Rodger .

THE END

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

this is just about my child hood memories .... i hope you like it tell me what you think

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Aw this is so sad. I lost my favorite aunt not too long ago. Sorry for your loss.

[Eleanor]

Ah. Such a sad ending.
-Eleanor x

[Kenneth The Poet]

Sad tale, but no less than heartfelt here.

[Amila Jay]

Going down memory lane!! It's very nice to recall childhood memories. Nice write :))

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love how you keep your childhood memories alive :) This is great and you did a wonderful job with this.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good story. It has a sad ending. Good to remember the people who were kind to us. I like the part about your grandfather and the food. Thank you for sharing the excellent story.
Coyote

[exotic flotsam]

Wonderful flowing style. I went with you immediately into your way fun childhood. I felt as did you, until the end. All good things... . So too did my childhood. That you devoted much more to the happy recollections than the sad end, tells me happiness enters your head and heart more deeply than darkness.

[Pencrafter]

It's good to recall childhood memories. The past is what makes us who we are.
You might try changing the format into a very short story, rather than a poem. Also, take your time and proof-read, looking for errors in the writing. It will make the reading of it smoother and more enjoyable.
It was a pleasant walk along memory lane, which I enjoyed. Nice job.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Awww, its so cute and sweet and ending brought a tear to my eye. Im sorry about your auntie and uncle, but I'm sure their spirits are proud of you.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

good tribute........

r.i.p.