Traveiling down a dark road!!!

This is kind of like a horror poem i get eaten by a vampire there... well let me know what you think

Traveling down a dark Road!!

I see myself traveling down this long black road,

I kept on walking,

As daylight passes by,

Oh what a joy,

It's getting darker, and darker,

I start to get scared,

There's no light to see,

I don't even got a flash light,

Oh man,

I'm really scared,

What should I do?

I see a man,

I call him over,

Asked him if there's any shelter anywhere for me to stay,

He wouldn't answer,

The old man just walked away,

I call out to him again,

He looked very upset,

He finally comes up to me,

His face was horrid looking,

His eyes were very bright and Red,

he looked like he had really sharp teeth,

Kind of like a vampire,

I get scared,

And I began to run,

Help me,

Help me,

I cry out,

But no help,

The old man catches up,

Attacks me,

Blood everywhere,

And I was dead.

The End ,

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

just a horror flick poem lol... well just let me know what you think of it ...

Reviews

[T. Michele Smock]

COOL HUN

[♋ Iris ♋]

Pretty good! I like the horror in a poem sort of thing. Keep it up~!

[olla]

to find poetry even in a horror flick is a gift.. keep writing..

[?]

oh my...sounds like a nightmare
very good

[CatOfOrion]

The story line is very clear! Good work.

[SlightlyOdd]

Hmm cool

[Emerald Seas]

Funny! Not sure that is what you were going for, but I wasn't expecting that... or maybe it is my own attempts to get my mind away from horror. Keep writing...