Traveiling down a dark road!!!

This is kind of like a horror poem i get eaten by a vampire there... well let me know what you think

Traveling down a dark Road!!

I see myself traveling down this long black road,

I kept on walking,

As daylight passes by,

Oh what a joy,

It's getting darker, and darker,

I start to get scared,

There's no light to see,

I don't even got a flash light,

Oh man,

I'm really scared,

What should I do?

I see a man,

I call him over,

Asked him if there's any shelter anywhere for me to stay,

He wouldn't answer,

The old man just walked away,

I call out to him again,

He looked very upset,

He finally comes up to me,

His face was horrid looking,

His eyes were very bright and Red,

he looked like he had really sharp teeth,

Kind of like a vampire,

I get scared,

And I began to run,

Help me,

Help me,

I cry out,

But no help,

The old man catches up,

Attacks me,

Blood everywhere,

And I was dead.

The End ,

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

just a horror flick poem lol... well just let me know what you think of it ...

Reviews

[AK]

Ooh! Spooky and scary! Great job!

[Seanne Tholltree]

scary thought

[Laura Storm]

Dark but not quite horror. Like it though. Good job.

[Ice Girl]

So dark... I love it!!!

[Who Cares]

This was great, thank you for sharing it

[Evelyn Storm]

Good.

[Brantwijn]

It does indeed read like a horror flick, you catch that tone very well.

[Amila Jay]

Hey got me going in there for a while ;) Excellent poem:)

[MandaBear]

.sounds like a nightmare. good job :)

[Marie]

That's really scary--you call out for help and get attacked by a vampire.