Traveiling down a dark road!!!

This is kind of like a horror poem i get eaten by a vampire there... well let me know what you think

Traveling down a dark Road!!

I see myself traveling down this long black road,

I kept on walking,

As daylight passes by,

Oh what a joy,

It's getting darker, and darker,

I start to get scared,

There's no light to see,

I don't even got a flash light,

Oh man,

I'm really scared,

What should I do?

I see a man,

I call him over,

Asked him if there's any shelter anywhere for me to stay,

He wouldn't answer,

The old man just walked away,

I call out to him again,

He looked very upset,

He finally comes up to me,

His face was horrid looking,

His eyes were very bright and Red,

he looked like he had really sharp teeth,

Kind of like a vampire,

I get scared,

And I began to run,

Help me,

Help me,

I cry out,

But no help,

The old man catches up,

Attacks me,

Blood everywhere,

And I was dead.

The End ,

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

just a horror flick poem lol... well just let me know what you think of it ...

Reviews

[BS Johnson]

Good write. I was there with you- in the dark woods with no flashlight. I thought we were ok when the old man had walked away, but then he came back and when we saw his red eyes and sharp teeth, I knew we were in for!! :)

[Raven Starhawk]

I can see myself on the same road and where I am wandering to is always a place filled with horror. This was a richly flavored piece.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Horror indeed!

[Starcaller]

Very creepy, really cool XD

[fireblossom]

Another dream from Jennifer.
This time a nightmare.
This leaves a clear picture in my head. I think it works really well.

[Thea]

Such a dark write...Great work!
:)))

[Roe]

this is such a great write!

[Barnie :)]

NIce poem :) You do a really nice job Hun :)

[Missy Moooooo]

I liked this poem :) Nice job :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i like how you mixed in a story as well