Traveiling down a dark road!!!

Traveiling down a dark road!!!

A Poem by jennifer little
"

This is kind of like a horror poem i get eaten by a vampire there... well let me know what you think

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Traveling down a dark Road!!



I see myself traveling down this long black road,

I kept on walking,

As daylight passes by,

Oh what a joy,

It's getting darker, and darker,

I start to get scared,

There's no light to see,

I don't even got a flash light,

Oh man,

I'm really scared,

What should I do?

I see a man,

I call him over,

Asked him if there's any shelter anywhere for me to stay,

He wouldn't answer,

The old man just walked away,

I call out to him again,

He looked very upset,

He finally comes up to me,

His face was horrid looking,

His eyes were very bright and Red,

he looked like he had really sharp teeth,

Kind of like a vampire,

I get scared,

And I began to run,

Help me,

Help me,

I cry out,

But no help,

The old man catches up,

Attacks me,

Blood everywhere,

And I was dead.


The End ,


BY: Jennifer Little

© 2012 jennifer little


Author's Note

jennifer little
just a horror flick poem lol... well just let me know what you think of it ...

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I really like this one. A little jagged in language, but in a good way. Adds character. Also a fan of the build up to the abrupt ending.
Well done.
'Captain

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the poem. I like a good horror movie. I like the description of the trip and the bloody ending to the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Actually, I do like this poem, except for the end. But that's me. I enjoy good endings. But dreams can be anything. The writing was easy to read and portrayed great emotion.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh wow.. how interesting.. such a twist! I love where you went with this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


OH MY!
i was really imagining something else during the first half of the poem.
I thought he's the Angel Savior.
But it turned out to be the opposite :)
I liked that

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yikes !!

Posted 12 Years Ago


good job....loved the blood and horror....

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its a good start, though it needs some work. I think that this is more of an outline. You should add in some more details and honestly, I think that this should be a short story rather than a poem. It would probably be better. But I like what you have.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well,now we see why the old man didn't want to come over in the first place:3

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh that sounds so horrible like Horror movie! but very nice imaginary, and real as a story...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 18, 2012
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jennifer little
jennifer little

jackson, MI



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hi im jen i am a single mother of one daughter . i struggle from ptsd depression and anxiety . from being in abusive realationships . i enjoy the outdoors , nature swimming fishing camping boat.. more..

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