Summer !!!

well this is another poem i wrote when i was 17 years old year 2009 ..... I made changes to it a lot its use to be really short made it longer

Summer ,

As I walk along the outside and the season's keep on changing so fast,

I look up into the sky, and see the clouds go by,

I hear the bird's chirping,

I see people swimming,

And it's really hot out,

Must be summer time again,

That was fast seems like just yesterday it was spring,

Time to have lot's of fun,

Jump into the water and go swimming,

Time to go fishing,

And boating,

Time to go kayaking, and much much more things,

I run and jump,

I lay down and look at the sunny sky,

beautiful clouds going by,

I say thank you God for all the seasons that go by,

I look upon the stars at night,

I hold your hand tight,

As I lay upon the night sky and say I love you,

Summer time is so much fun,

You hear the kids screaming, and yelling having so much fun,

I can't believe It's summer time again.

The end,

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well let me know what you think........ give me some review s hope you like it and enjoy it i got much much more poems comeing i have my funny kids poems i wrote out and getting ready to type them all out and see what happens from there

Reviews

[Chris]

thought-full

[MandaBear]

I personally like spring better but summer is good too. nice poem :)

[Seanne Tholltree]

so much to do in summer!!!fun,fun,fun

[Emerald Seas]

You show all the joy and activities that have us yearning for summer fun. Great read!

[Becky Clancy]

So sweet and moving, I love this one as well :3

nice,!!

[SapphirianVampiress]

I like it this is good :)

[Who Cares]

It was an exceptional poem and Your ideas are good but need some elaboration. Your writing is simple which can be good but sometimes to give the srtong powerful message to a reader you need to be forceful with your words, taking risks, become complex. Either way nice work.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Very cute and lovely, I like it :3

[Marie]

You make all hope it will soon be summr again.