Winter!!!

another one of my poems i wrote at 17 years old ...... back in 2009

Winter,

I walk outside, and I see snow.

Must be winter,

I go back inside and say,

Yes it's winter time again,

I go outside and run and jump into the snow,

I make a snow angel and look up at the sky,

I get up,

I start to roll a ball,

And I start making a snowman,

Oh what a joy,

Must be winter time again.

The End,

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well this is another poem hope you enjoy it and like it ...
Let me know what you think aout it ....

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Winter is probably my favorite season of them all :)
This is well written! Great job.

[Pencrafter]

This is a simple poem about simple pleasures in life. I like it because it's easy to read and understand, yet creates colorful images. I appreciate your care with the spelling and punctuation.
Good job.

[Cassie Fraga]

Im not a big fan of winter... **bbuuurrrrr** to cold, but the way you pen makes me wanna throw on 50 jackets and take my a$$ outside go jump in the snow!! hahahaha!! very well penned!!

[Thea]

Oh, I love winter...This was so beautiful...Well done.
:)))

[Laura Storm]

I dislike winter but this is a good positive view of it.

[olla]

yes.. it is nice also.. have you considered tying them all together in one piece..?

[AK]

Very nice again!

[Careless Whispers ._.]

i love snow but not winter & u did a great job of capturing the hidden beauty

[BS Johnson]

It was well written, however, I hate winter! lol If I never see another snowflake again, it'll be too soon! So, that being said, I enjoyed the write, it took me there (yeah-thanks) and now I'm cold! haha That just means you did a great job!