Climb to the strange world,

another one of my poems i wrote when i was 17 back in 2009 /....

Climb To the strange world,

I climb the stair's but there's no way out of here,

I look up there's a little room a mouse could fit in,

I go up to it as I shrink,

I see a beautiful world,

As I walk further there's a rabbit,

There's no way out of this world,

What am I suppose to do,

As I walk further down the small path there's a little girl who stare's and say's hi,

Then I walk further there's nowhere else to go,

What am I suppose to do?

The end,

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well let me know what you think ......

Reviews

[Marie]

Follow the rabbit.

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice :)

[Who Cares]

I feel like there was an Alice in Wonderland type theme here. It was nicely written and I like the confusion at the end, Like your main characater has no idea what they should do. Good job nad keep writing

[Alex Vidmar]

This is really good. I really like this one Jen. Definitely adding this to my library.