Climb to the strange world,

another one of my poems i wrote when i was 17 back in 2009 /....

Climb To the strange world,

I climb the stair's but there's no way out of here,

I look up there's a little room a mouse could fit in,

I go up to it as I shrink,

I see a beautiful world,

As I walk further there's a rabbit,

There's no way out of this world,

What am I suppose to do,

As I walk further down the small path there's a little girl who stare's and say's hi,

Then I walk further there's nowhere else to go,

What am I suppose to do?

The end,

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well let me know what you think ......

Reviews

[CrimsonBlaze]

Reminds me of my lost forevee alone self. -sniffles- Anyways, great job in capturing moments that others may have experienced !

[J. J. Nightingale]

I hear you .. Sometimes it seems there is no where else to go .. I've set in little corners, searching my mind, for a way out ....

Well said .. Jazz

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

This too reminds me of Alice in Wonderland... I like it, creative.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Hmmm, this one reminds me of Alice in Wonderland.. very dreamy and a world that you can't escape.. hmm i often think of escape to another world.. i think it'd be more fun. =)

[Brantwijn]

I like the unspoken connection to Alice in Wonderland. Good job.

[Chris]

This one reminds me of many whys... and what innocence is.

[MandaBear]

i love it.i love the alice in wonderland relationship. it is the best (especially the johnny depp version) lol great write

[exotic flotsam]

There is someplace to go. Alice and her tale's cohorts lie i wait. Take the surreal ride.

nice relation to like alice and wonderland, i like it, great imagery

[Fragilebrokendreams]

I agree with Marie follow the rabbit.