deep Blue Sky!!

well this is a poem i wrote back in 2009... just hope you like it.,....

Deep Blue sky,

As I look up at the sky I see a beautiful blue sky.

I see a bird fly by.

I look down at the ground.

I see green grass, and thank God for all the beautiful things.

I look back up at the sky and listen to the birds chirp.

I see the pretty clouds go by.

Oh what a Joy.

The End,

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

this is my poem when i wrote it back in 2009 when i first started writing poetry ,,,,, i have always writen stories and books since i was in 2nd grade but started writing poems back in 2009 when i was 17 i loved it started researching more to find out how and what to make my poems better and sound good ....

well just let me know what you think

Reviews

[Missy Moooooo]

Nice job (:

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Love to see spring again and the deer and birds back out again....

[CrimsonBlaze]

Its kinda wierd how everybody starts writing poems between the age of twelve and eighteen! Anyways, you have a talent right within the palms of your hands. And youve used it beaitifully....keep it up!

[Sahar moonlight]

sweet and imagery poem!
nice one :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I like the energy and hope in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Beauty. Simply beauty. You bring nature's simple ways into this write, something some people miss.

[Seanne Tholltree]

vividly vivid...great

[fireblossom]

Jennifer...I wonder if you've every put your poems to music. I put a couple of Laurie Anderson pieces on my page. This poem reminds me of her and other performance artist/musicians. The simplicity and clarity of your writing surprises me and makes me happy.

[Brantwijn]

You have a real talent for bringing the meaning out of clear icons and images of nature.

[Chris]

Simple and nice.