Looking into the stars!!!

well this is a poem i was working on earlyer typing out and decided to stop and work on somthing else so i hope you enjoy this poem

Looking into the stars!

　

I look into the stars,

I see my self in the sky,

I want to fly high,

Oh gee,

How i wish i could just fly away,

And live wonderlussly upon the sky,

I look up into the you’r eyes,

I see a frightened little girl,

Oh how I feel so ashamed,

That little girl was me,

I seen myself in this cruel place,

This cruel world,

living upon people,

cruel,

mean,

sensational people,

Love,

Sex,

Rock,

And Roll,

I don’t see this upon my eyes,

I wonder through the sky,

Trying to find answers,

And hope,

Dream,

Can’t my dreams come true,

Oh how i wish people could understand,

It’s night right,

It’s not right to pick on a poor little girl,

My mind is wondering upon the stars,

My mind is wondering,

Wonderussly blank,

Wonderlussly criuse of this world,

our world is dark, and gray,

Full of cruel,

Cruel people.

The end,

　

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

it's a poem .,... don't really know how to explain it but i love this poem its really awsome i see my self looking upon this stars thinking of all these things .....
well i hope you enjoy this poem and let me know what you think

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the idea of enjoying nature looking up at the stars and relaxing thinking about things and how the world can in fact be so cruel, and is. Nice write.

[Brantwijn]

This poem shows a bit more immersion, I would guess it's later than your 2009 poems. I see growth in your medium; you're learning to use your imagery well. Wonderful!

[Becky Clancy]

Very flowing poem, really good, I love this poem (:

this is deep, i like it so much because i too can relate to this. Putting myself in your position seeing what you saw

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Wow, very well done. I can relate to this, as I child I always looked up at the stars and asked myself so many questions and made so many wishes. This is really beautiful.

[Alex Vidmar]

Beautifully well written. That's all i have to say

[quarintine_deathangel]

That word Wonderlussly, it fits the poem perfect and as unexplainable as it is the poem has a drawing in it's words, truly addictive and talented, loved it!

[Cassie Fraga]

it has an "alice in wonderland" affect to it... and I love free flow pieces, this was an awesome read!!

[?]

Very good poem with great discriptions
Enjoyed...thanks for sharing with me

[Angelic Surrender]

This is profound and very deep. good job :)