Warrior!!!

it's just another one of my poems ........

Warrior ,

　

I am a warrior,

A God of the arena,

The hither and watch upon you as you fight,

I am strong,

And pur,

Can i fight?

Can i be a warrior of the gods?

I want to fight,

I want to be a warrior,

please choose me,

I’d rather be a warrior than a slave,

So i’m a girl,

“But,” I am pur,

And I am strong,

I can fight,

Please choose me,

I don’t want to be a slave no more,

I’ll do anything for you,

Only if you let me be a warrior.

The end,

　

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well let me know what you think ....
I'm not going to change my work for anyone ....
So if your going to say something say it by being nice and not rude at all.
I'll fix my grammer or spelling down the line ok .....

Reviews

[Evelyn Storm]

Your fighting spirit comes through in this poem. Well done.

[SparksLC]

This is really creative! it also has a nice flow to it, good job!

[hmm]

This write is very well written,
i enjoyed this alot!

[misscb]

Very good... Well done!!!

[Marie]

Very good...everyone wants to be a warrior, not a slave.