A dream of my old house!!!!!

i had this dream today on 3-11-12 .. i turned it into a short storie but all of this is what was in my dream

i had this dream on 3-11-12

By: Jennifer Little

　

A dream of my old house!!!!

　

I had a dream that i was at my old house in Hillsdale Mi. My house was back to normal. It was the same color it was same looks as it was when my Grandpa lived there. It was the house that was in the woods. I went there and found My old cat Kasie that i raised up as a kitten a little baby. He was Orange and White. HE was scared to come up to me. I said,” Kasie come here it’s OK it’s mommy. come here. I finally grabbed him and held him. I said,” It’ll be OK mommy is here for you. Then to find out that my friend Kaylynn was the person who was buying our house. She was making me mad. She said,” I get to have all you’re cars I get to have you’re bed, I get to have you’re cat scarf. She was ticking me off. I told her in my dream well hey i don’t have no cats here anymore their all gone thats when i seen my old cat. And this was the end of the dream. Kaylynn bought the house.

　

The End,

　

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

i had this dream today on 3-11-12 .. i turned it into a short storie but all of this is what was in my dream didn't add on to it at all ... just wanted to put what was in my dream and that was it....... tell me what you think..... Let me know what you like about it ... i'm not changing my work... if your going to be in polite or mean do not commet on my stuff as a review if your going to be nice go ahead ...... should i turn my dream into a book actual book ? should i keep on going?

Reviews

[Starcaller]

Sad isn't it...very beautiful though :D

[Me]

Punctuation would help the flow of this piece a great deal!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a very neat short story.

[khalid]

yes for sure you must let that great book come to light.hope one day i have it in my library. keep on great work