Tears of a sad little girl!!

just something to say.,.... dont really know how to explain this but just let me know what you think ..

Tears of a sad little girl!!!

　

You made me sad,

You made me cry,

I’m a little girl at heart,

Yippee,

I have troubles,

Sorrows,

Pain,

Suffering,

You put me down,

You hurt me,

You don’t even know me,

I’m a poor little girl,

Stuck here in this cruel world,

Help me forever until this day is gone,

You call me a moron,

You put me down,

A sad little girl,

You made me cry,

Cry,

You want me to give up,

“But”, guess what i’ll never give up,

I can’t belive this world is so cruel,

Sitting here crying,

There Tears of a sad little girl who has been made fun of,

Hurt all her life,

I lost a loved one,

I loved him so much,

My uncle,

He was so close to me,

He was the best uncle ever.

　

The end,

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

hello there this is just another poem ,.... let me know what you think .,......

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

I like the simplicity and clarity of the verse. It does hurt when we lose loved ones. And we do care about what others think of us. Focus more on the good and positive things and we'll all be happier.
Well done.

[quarintine_deathangel]

(eight lines up from the bottom of the poem, your There should be a they're just so ya know) Your poems seem heavily channeled through anger and trials and troubles of life they are very realistic and absolutely relatable, you explain reality and anger very directly, truly a talent!

[J.V. Stanley]

The insensitivity of others is saddening. For most of the time people can't see past their own issues and show empathy to another whose heart is equally as broken.

[Marie]

A very sad poem of loss.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Heartfelt jenn...made me feel sad too , your words touched me.

[MandaBear]

very interesting :) I am sorry for your lost though. I hope no one is ever mean to you again!