Hurtful words you say to me!!!!

well this poem is made out of angry also so hope you enjoy it tell me what you think

Hurtful words you say to me!!!

　

　

You may critisise me,

You may put me down,

You may laugh at me,

You may be rude to me,

I can be a B***h you know,

I’m begging to hare people more, and more, don’t you know how to just leave things alone,

Leave me alone,

You hurt me,

You put me down,

You critisise my work,

This is why people go insane,

This is why people die,

This is not nice at all,

Don’t talk to me,

Leave me alone,

Stop reading my stuff,

Come on you call me a moron,

You called me stupid,

Well you know what this hurts,

It Hurts me, and it hurts others.

　

The End,

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

just a little something i wrote out of angry and maddness ,,,,, just let me know what you think

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

There is a line with respect and ranting, and you do that well here.

[Thea]

So much anger...Well, it sometimes happens that there are those b*tches who give out some freaking mess in our lives...Anyway, great and powerful piece!
:)))

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A good ranting poem letting all the anger and madness out on paper .. !

Chloe

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It works as a ranting piece, that is all.

[Marie]

I don't see why this can't be a poem instead of a blog. You put it in the form of a poem.

[jennifer little]

its my poem not a blog i want it to be a poem not a blog

[J. J. Nightingale]

This should be in blogs ... Not a Poem ..

J.