Dream that all the snow went away,

this is a dream i had today a dream ... well made it into a poem please do not put my work down i spend lots of time on my work .

dream i had on 3-10-12

made it into a poem if you want to count it as a poem........

　

Dream that all the snow went away,

I had a dream,

A dream that there was tons of snow,

The snow all melted away in one night,

Because it was so warm out,

I swear it was global warming,

bad summer this year,

I was boats on the water,

People fishing,

people swimming,

Everything was flooded,

Terrible, Horrible site.

　

　

The end,

　

BY: Jennifer little

　

　

Author's Note

well let me know what you think please do not put my work down or be mean ,,,,, im mad , people are makeing me that way so please do not hurase me or put my stuff down if i have spelling errors just let me know in a nice way not mean just give me a hint i spend hours and hours on my work .... just for people to put it down ,,,, please give advice but dont be rude let me know nicely be like hey just to help you out heres a hint or yeah you know what i mean

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

An interesting dream. I thought about writing about my dreams, too. Good job, but I agree with Thomas, it could use a bit of editing.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

As long as your happy with your work, don't let other's put it down, just let that be ignored if your proud of your work enough it shouldn't matter much with the let downs of others. The fact that you can write what you dreamed with that same imagery you awoke to remember is something not all can do, sometimes it ain't so easy to remember dreams. I know, I have done the same. I would count this as a poem, it just is a poem with a story to it. A dream. A true thing. A unique image of your own that no one can picture but you, we can only interpret it in our own image and meaning perhaps but yours is the original idea and image. With all of that said, I like this, it is a unique picture, a unique dream, that is from you. Thank you for sharing your dreams in these lovely poems you take time on. It does show.

[WhiteWillow]

I have read a few of your pieces today, and I can see the passion you put into your work. People will always have something pleasant, and unpleasant, to say. Try not to take every comment personally, and use it as an advantage to make your work better. That's what we're all here for.

You have a wonderful way of choosing topics to write about. My one suggestion would be this: try not to put "the end" after every piece.

Will be back to read more of your work!

[jennifer little]

like i have been saying i'm not changing my work for you or anybody ..... this was my dream i had and this is it this is how it went so dont tell me anything ok this was my dream my dream it went like that so i put it the same azact way it wen tyou dont like it then go blow off ok

[T. Michele Smock]

i agree with thomas sweetie

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A mere stab I think here my darling, I feel like you were researching this and then left it, try again!

[hmm]

Quite interesting read. Like it though. Nicely done

[Marie]

That was quite a dream. Either you're afraid all the snow will go away, or you want it to.

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What an interesting dream. Do you have a dream book? Maybe you could look up different things like the snow find out what it means.