Josie and Mr. Ruffles

well this is one of my childrens stories i wrote

Josie and Mr. Ruffles!

　

　

Josie had a dog named Mr. Ruffles.

She was in the third grade. When she came home from school everyday Mr. Ruffles would be waiting for Josie to get home. Josie had long black hair and blue eyes. She loved going outside to play and be with Mr. Ruffles.

　

　

　

　

　

One day when Josie came home from school Mr. Ruffles was not there. He wasn’t looking out the window or waiting for her. She called for him. Mr. Ruffles where are you? Come out Mr. Ruffles! She looked all over for him.He wasn’t in the bathroom. He wasn’t in the kitchen, He wasn’t down stairs. He wasn’t in the bedrooms, and he wasn’t in the living room. Where was Mr. Ruffles.

　

　

　

　

　

　

After Josie looked all over the house she ran out side. She said,” mom, dad Mr. Ruffles is missing.” Her mom and dad said,” ugh deer Mr. Ruffles got loose and ran away.”
She got mad. Josie said,” not fare.I want Mr. Ruffles back. “ Josie was sad.

She wanted Mr. Ruffles to come back home. Her mom and dad said,” Just to and play in the yard on the swings or trampolean.” So Josie did what her parents said but she was still sad.

　

When Josie was playing outside her friend Anna came over. Anna said,” come here real Quick.” Josie said,” Why?” Anna said,” because i have to show you something.” So Josie went to the car with Anna and Mr. Ruffles was in the car. Josie was happy. She said,” Anna thank you. thank you oh so very much. Where did you find him?” He was running around in my yard when i got home from school. My parents told me that they would take me to your house to bring Mr. Ruffles back to you.” Josie said,” oh thank you so much. I don’t know what i would do with out him. Do you want to stay here and eat dinner with us? were having a cook out.”

Anna said,” I’ll have to ask my parents. Hold on a minute i’ll go ask them."

So Anna asked her parents and they let her stay over at Josie’s house for dinner.

　

　

　

　

　

Josie, and Anna were playing outside together, and having fun.

Josie was happy because she found Mr.Ruffles. Then it was time to eat. Josie’s parents called Anna and her to go eat dinner. So they went and ate the food. When everyone was done eating they all went inside to play games. Then after two hours past Anna had to go home it was getting late. Josie had to go to bed because she had school the next day. Josie put Mr. Ruffles to bed, and then she went to bed. They loved each other a whole lot.

　

　

　

　

　

　

The next day pasted by. Josie woke up,and got ready for school. It was Friday and she knew that she was going to have a fun day. She brought cupcakes, and other snakes to school. They were having a game, and movie day and they could bring snacks if they wanted to. Josie was very happy She left and went out the door and went off to school. Josie’s parents was taking care of Mr. Ruffles while she was gone.

　

When the day ended and it was time for Josie to come home from school everything went quit swell. Josie was all happy when she came home. She said,” We played all kinds of games today and watched three different movies, we had lots of snacks also.” Josie’s parents said,” well thats good that you had a good day at school. Mr. Ruffles is really happy to see you.” it was the weekend so Josie and her parents and of corse Mr. Ruffles went on a trip to the mountains because it was summer vacation. they always took trips there every summer for a month straight then they came home after all of this was over. Josie had a pretty good life, and she was happy. Because she had Mr. Ruffles with her to stay for ever.

　

　

The End,

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

this is a childrens storie i wrote hope you enjoy it ,,,, let me know what you think

Reviews

[MandaBear]

very nice story :) keep it up :)

[mark slade]

you did a really good job on this story, jen. maybe children's stories are your genre. keep writing.

[misscb]

This was a really great story... Very sweet perfect as a child's story... Well done!!!

[Pencrafter]

This is a sweet story well told. I enjoyed your writing style and the fact that it was easy to follow the story line. As a suggestion, perhaps you, or a family member, could proofread the story to check for grammatical, punctuation and spelling errors. Keep up the good work and cultivate your imagination.
Thank you for the pleasant story.