drugs, and drunk!!!

a poem expaining things that this stuff will kill you and that i seen my self sitting there it could be turned into a song... i think

Drugs, and Drunk,

　

　

I see my self sitting there at the bar,

Drunk, High on pills, high on pot,

I see my self sitting around lots of people drinking vodka, and beer and much more,

Everyones doing it lets do it,

I see my self passing out,

I see myself drunk and barley can walk,

I see my self going back words in life,

Don’t drink you’re life away,

Don’t do pills,

Don’t smoke pot,

It all kills you,

I see you leaving,

I see me going upstairs to cook something to eat,

barley can walk, and barley can cook,

I see my self way to buzzed up,

I see my self loving you,

I see myself going upstairs to go lay down for the night,

good night,

Don’t drink you’re life away,

Don’t do pills,

Don’t smoke pot,

It all kills you,

i see you leaving,

i wanna follow to go up stairs and relax,

i decide to stay down here and waste my time,

Drink some more,

Smoke some pot,

Let’s get high,

Come on everybody’s doing it,

It wont hurt you,

Oh yes it will it’ll hurt you so bad,

It’ll tear you apart,

It’ll kill you

Now think before you do it.

　

The end,

　

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well just a vision and letting people know that this stuff isn't good for you and stuff like that ...
let me know what you think

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

WE SHOULD BE OPEN TO CRITIQUES .. NOT MEAN THOUGHTS .. (YOU WILL FIX THEM WHEN YOU WANT TO ? ) HUMMM .. .. THIS IS A GOOD MESSAGE .. MUCH WISDOM HERE
YOU ALWAYS HAVE GOOD THINGS TO SAY .. I LIKE YOUR WORK .. JUST CALM DOWN .. AND ACCEPT OTHERS AS THEY ARE .. MAYBE THEY WILL DO THE SAME ...

HUGS .. JAZZY :)

BACKWARDS
MYSELF
YOUR LIFE
BARELY
LIE DOWN

[jennifer little]

hey you dont like my work then go blank off i mean it dont put my stuff down my work i spend hours and hours and lots of time doing so what i got spelling errors and grammer ill fix them when i want to ok so leave me alone really dont got something nice to say then dont say it at all ....... good bye

[Sometimes Blood]

Lots of Grammar and spelling errors. Reads more like a diary entry instead of a poem

[Eleanor]

I really enjoyed reading this and I agree with the message, Great job

[Eagle Cruagh]

I think this is a very clever rant.
It is so realistic, a girl hanging over
the bar, hardly able to see.
The destructive effects of addicting
substances cannot be stated too graphically.
And you have stated it very well.
Thank you,
----John

[Angelic Surrender]

Great message. good job :)

[hmm]

I liked this write, i agree good advice

[Marie]

Very good advice.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Been there, done that. I like my life now. I take it as it comes...unfiltered.
Nice poem.