Visions of life ,

well just a poem let me know what you think

Visions of life,

　

　

I see myself passing by,

I am riding a horse,

I was having fun,

We lived so happley,

We hit the lottery,

We was living a good life,

Peace on Earth,

Peace everywhere,

Keep friends close,

Never blow you’re friends away,

Keep you’re life going,

I want to be that girl,

Who stays happy forever.

　

　

The End,

　

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

this is another poem that i wrote let me know what you think

Reviews

[J.]

I think we all want to be happy forever. And I believe the way to attain such happiness like that, would be the most simplest thing. Yet being conditioned as us humans are, and have been raised in society to believe and be, causes us to always make things more difficult for ourselves. Kinda goes hand-in-hand with the saying, "Come as a child" where a child in their innocence approach life in the most simplest way, and here we...as adults, tend to forget that part of ourselves. If we'd only stop long enough to remember how it was to be that child, and let that child out again, can we finally see again how simple things really can be. But even to achieve this for most of us would be a chore for most, when most adults are either too hard headed to do so, or afraid. Lovely and encouraging read hon! Thank you!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is very sweet. Life can be full of promise... I love your vision...keep up the positivity! :)

[?]

What a wonderfully sweet vision...I think we all want to be that girl..have that vision. Good write.

[hmm]

I enjoyed this write, Poeticly wonderful.