A magical land upon the rocky desert,

this is a magical poem another one of my creative idea's .,

A magical land upon the rocky desert,

　

As i walk wonderlussly through the woods,

I see a mystical land,

I look and there’s birds, deer, wolf’s, and bears they were all lying down so peacefully,

It was a beautiful site,

I wonder off some more it turned into a magical land,

There were fairy’s, Unicorns, and talking penguin’s,

It was so wonderful,

I kept on walking and i ended up in a desert,

A desert that was so dry, and no water at all,

There were talking Lizards, and huge birds that swooped down upon me,

All the animals could talk,

I found a camel, and asked him,

Where am i?

The camel said,” You’re in the Rocky Desert.”,

I asked,” How can this be? I was just walking in the woods?”,

NO answer back.

I was freak ed out.

　

The End,

　

　

BY: Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well just another one of my magical poems let me know what you think ,.

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

The imagery is really good! A nice piece.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You bring imagination and creativity in this. This write seems refreshing to me. It is nice, enjoyed the fun picture you created in this.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

What a beautiful magical land...good imagination....

[T. Michele Smock]

yes it keep up the good writing

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The imagery is qutie striking, a well structured piece.

[misscb]

Great creativity again... Well done!!!