time is running out,

tick tock your time is up ... let me know what you think of my poem

Time Is Running out,

Tick tock, Tick tock,

Will you ever stop,

Tick tock, Tick tock,

Time is running out,

Tick tock, Tick tock,

Don’t do drugs,

Tick tock, Tick tock,

Don’t drink you’re life away,

Tick tock, Tick tock,

you’re getting sleepy,

Tick tock, Tick tock,

The sun is going down,

Tick tock, Tick tock,

you’re going to die,

better run away,

Find a place to hide,

The end is coming,

Find a place to hide,

The end is coming,

Were all going to die,

Tick tock, Tick tock,

Good luck.

　

The end ,

BY: Jennifer little

Author's Note

well really just poped into my head ..
let me know what you think.............

Reviews

[CrimsonBlaze]

The clock is ticking down indeed......even though the tick tock is repitious, it shows the meaning of the poem...Nice XD

[Angelic Surrender]

Intruiging. Good work. I like the repitition of "tick tock" Reminding us of the passing time. Nice :)

[MandaBear]

very clever :) good job

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I'm sure time is running out on all of us....good job.....

[Marie]

I like the way the ticking clock runs all through this.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Not bad, really good. I just felt so anxious while reading this it made me paranoid and rushed like I had to finish or something bad would happen. Gives off a good feeling.

[T. Michele Smock]

it is a very good peom

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Now this is a much better attempy, perfectly flowed with a stern meaning, well done, good read.

[AK]

Wow! That's great! I like the recurring tick tock it gives the poem the feeling of impatience. Awesome poem!