I saw Heaven!!!

another dream that goes with all the other ones the two i had had them all three in a row plus lots more things happend in my dream

  Dream I had on 3-5-12

Story or poem can be both.

Created by: Jennifer little

 

   I saw Heaven,

I had a dream,

A dream,

I looked into the clouds; I saw Heaven, and Hell,

I saw my grandma in heaven in a red rob,

I saw everyone,

I see lots of people in Heaven,

They were in church bleachers singing and standing,

I saw many people,

People I knew that was dead,

People I didn’t know,

Then I saw myself in Heaven,

I was walking through,

As everything began to change,

I was in Heaven,

I saw people in Hell that I knew.

What does this mean?

 

The end,

By: Jennifer little

 

 

 

Author's Note

i serusly dont know what this is about really three dreams in a row all together like the same thing seeing jesus and heaven .. well tell me what you think

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Seems like a real serious dream with meaning. The vision within your words here, are more described. Would be nice to see this as a book/ story.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Really lovely, I think its interesting.

[Cassie Fraga]

dreams are so mysterious yes.... your image is on point with this one, very clear and well written, great job!!

[Brantwijn]

A very nice little journey -- and that's definitely what it feels like, a journey. I'd do a read through for grammar and syntax, but otherwise it's very well said.

[fireblossom]

I adore this poem. The innocence of it is sweet. There may be a couple of spelling mistakes but that's small stuff compared to the tone and content of this really nice poem.

[Seanne Tholltree]

i dint wanna scare you but i guess it's NDA

[misscb]

Very interesting... Loved how you managed to describe it so well... Amazing poem... Well done!!!

[Xerclipse]

well those dreams are interesting, and they are even better when you write them down

[CrimsonBlaze]

Your dreams are always interesting, and they never fail to entertain me. Great job at describing your point of it ^_^

[Angelic Surrender]

This is serious stuff. Great work