Lottery,

i had a dream a dream today i wrote it into a story , it was my dream my dream what does this mean ?

  Lottery,

 

I had a dream,

A dream of things that happened,

Me and my boyfriend was shopping had a whole cart full of meat bread and milk,

But we left it outside for a little bit because we had to do something,

Something got into it and torn into all the food,

It was all gone when we went back outside,

The all of a sudden we went to this place where you pick a ball and if if had these sustain letters or writing on it you would be rich you hit the lottery.

So I grabbed a ball out. My boyfriend was telling me you’re not going to get that ball, you’re not going g to win,

Well guess what in my dream I won. I won,

We hit the big one.

We were rich.

The end,

By: Jennifer little

Author's Note

tell me what you think . let me know if i should add on to it longer and make it into a book. this was my dream 2-27-12 .....

Reviews

[T. Michele Smock]

very good and i do have more of my peoms i posted please take the time to read them

[patricia]

well, if I had a dream like that, I would be expecting something real good was going to happen for me. This was a lovely poem, it felt exciting. Thanks.

[Jack Isaac]

There is a misfortune that leads to fortune; often the case in waking life too, might the ball be the Powerball? Hmmm... Did you remember the numbers in this dream? (if so send them to me in a message --lol) This is a neat little dream with a good message to it. If it's rare to have dreams that make sense, then this one is a lottery winner of sorts. Thanks for sharing this.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Hopefully it means you will win :)

[jimmy]

I think it would be a nice idea to add more to this. ^_^

[Marie]

Yes, you could make this a little longer. Tell how you and your boyfriend felt about getting all that money. It must have been esciting.

[misscb]

Liked the idea here... Well done!!!

[lei]

well it is a short story and it's nice but you can spice it a bit more, what happens after you got the money? is getting rich made the relationship stronger?did you love each other more? how did the money transform you? :)