Haunting in a school!!!

this is another one of my dreams i had .. i made it into a poem going to turn it into a storie or a book ...

Haunting in a school !!!

 

 

Wait stop,

I was in my old school in Reading Michigan,

It was haunted; anybody who went there was doomed to die,

I was scared,

Crying like a little girl,

Saying that there was something in this school, something evil ,

An evil spirit no one believed me until, something bad happened ,

Everyone started to believe me once they saw it,

They were running   scared,

I just stood there.

The end,

By: Jennifer little

Author's Note

this is a dream i had it's a true dream . i remember most dreams of mine and try to write them down as soon as i wake up so i dont forget
well hope you enjoyed reading this and tell me what you think

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Sounds a bit mystical and scary! Good job.

[T. Michele Smock]

very nice

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It certainly has a dream like quality, a most diverse wording scheme, well done.

[patricia]

oh sorry, I should have reviewed this bit first. A dream? that makes this all different, they say all building are supposed to be our bodies in dreams, if I remember rightly. But I wont go all analytic on you. Its good to write dreams down, my dreams tell me a lot, I find them helpful. Thanks.

[CrimsonBlaze]

Wow :) !! I like how this is going so far! I admire how you can remember dreams so accurately! Me? I the myself when I have the most interesting or fantastic dream and a few seconds after I wake up, I like, completely forget everything. From thi s point, it kinda reminds me of The anime Ghost Hunt when they investigate different places. They're all highschool teens and yeah.. I noticed it was the highschool again... Wonder if it's anything of significance -winks-

[J. J. Nightingale]

Spooky ...

Jazz .. :)