Thank you my sweet angel for stopping by,

a horor poem - good poem

Thank you my sweet angel for stopping by,

 

The sunset arise upon the night sky,

I look up and see a bird,

A really pretty bird,

It had a coat of so many colors,

It was big, really big,

Then it dropped down,

It was ten feet high,

I wonder over to see what kind of bird it was and it was a mocking bird,

But not one I have ever seen,

It turned around,

It looked evil on its face,

Looked like a demon from hell,

I go closer to see what it was doing,

It was tearing and eating flesh from a human body,

It sees me I run and run,

It’s catching up,

Oh no what do I do now,

I look and look and look,

I see an owl a beautiful white owl,

It looked like and angel from heaven,

It swooped down and saved me,

I said,” thank you my savor for saving my life,

You are my guardian angel,

I see his eyes,

They were so bright, and pretty,

The owl was an angel,

It saved my life I was so glad that it saved my life,

I was happy,

I was thankful,

It was my savior from heaven,

I say good bye, my sweet angel and thanks for stopping by.

 

The end,

By: Jennifer little

Author's Note

its about a person whe saya huge bird of many colors but to soon find out it was a demon from hell ,
it turned around and seen me , i ran , then an owl a beautiful white owl came and saved me my sweet angel from heaven saved me again

Reviews

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i love the use of birds and wings my most favorite things in the world!!!!!!!!! beautiful poem :3

[Missy Moooooo]

Awesome write. (:

[Chris]

We've each angels to watch over us... and take away our fears.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting poem. I like the white owls. The mystery of the owl allow the story to have balance and purpose. I like the complete story. A very strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Maria.F.T]

This is so cool and sweet

[Eleanor]

Interesting.....Good job!
-Eleanor

[Marie]

A pretty story...one bird a demon, one bird an angel....

[misscb]

Liked the story telling aspect of this poem... Well done!!!

[ATG]

An interesting poem. It was like a story in a poem format. There were a few minor grammer errors, but nothing too bad. Overall, a very good read.

[jimmy]

Interesting... I've not really seen a poem like this, and honestly, I liked it. Good point of view and a fairly nice description of what's going on. Very nice job. :)