hold you tight!!!!

another love poem

  Hold you tight!!!!

I wanna hug you,

I wanna hold you tight,

I wanna cuddle with you all night long,

I wanna love you until this day is gone,

Sweetie I love you oh so very much,

Kiss me,

Squeeze me tight,

Love me,

Hug me, and hold me tight,

Baby you’re my only one for me,

I’ll always love you no matter what,

Trust me our love is closer than ever.

I love you.

Good night.

 

The end,

By: Jennifer little

Author's Note

i really like this one ..
tell me what you think

Reviews

[Starcaller]

Aww! Very sweet :3

[_]

"Everytime we meet, eveything is sweet, oooh you're so tender, i must surrender you're love is my love, no and forever!" this poem reminded me of that song :D i wubz it it makes me smile! :D

[~Lizzy♬]

Awww! So beautiful :)

~Lizzy~

[Eleanor]

I really really liked this one! One of my favorites by you for sure. Amazing job
-Eleanor

[Marie]

It sounds like a good song.

[ATG]

A very good poem overall. Some of the lines were a bit redundent, but that sort of adds a little character to it. It made the poem seem like someone was writing it from the heart.

[misscb]

This was very sweet... Well done!!!

[McKenna B.]

i like this!

[jimmy]

I really like this one as well. ^_^ Very nice emotions are being swiftly told through this, and it almost seems like a song. Good job. :)

[Thea]

Very well expressed in words...Lets out so much passion and love...Well done.
:)))