The Curse !!!!!!!!

it's a horor poem kind of and a action one at the same tim e

      The Curse

 

  The shinning sun,

Laying down,

Love forever,

Live forever,

Money, riches, joy,

Oh what a joy,

It goes dark,

The wolfs are howling,

It gets darker, and darker,

In the night of howls,

Hear lies a screaming girl,

Help, help, and help me,

Someone’s trying to kill me,

Oh no what should I do,

Could it be the curse?

The curse from the underground world called Hell,

No it can’t be,

Out pop’s a winged figure so fruitful and scary,

It was dark and had scars all over it,

It was a horrible site.

Help, Help, and Help me,

The girl cried again,

Shadows in the dark,

What are they?

Oh no it’s the curse of satin,

Were all doomed,

Good bye.

 

 

   The End,

BY: JENNIFER LITTLE

Author's Note

sad , horor , poem the curse the demon from hell trys to kill and will haunt you till this day

Reviews

[ATG]

A slightly childish (in a good way) horror poem. The imagery was well done and the poem was interesting. The poem wasn't really scary and the tone wasn't really horror based. Made me think of someone about to jump into action and save the girl. Had more of an action feel with horror elements. The poem was overall very good. One typo though. "It was dark and had scares all over it." I believe you meant scars. Just a minor typo that made me stop reading to figure out what you meant.

[misscb]

Wow!!! Very intense... Great job!!!

[Marie]

This is frightening...a demon from Hell could pop up any time...