A Passage to a magical world !

it's a poem about a magical world that was descovered of lepercons and faries and no human was allowed to pass through

 

 

 

 

              A Passage TO  A Magical World !

As i walk through the passge

I see a light, A really bright light

So i walk further ,

It looked to be a world of Lepercon's and Fairies ,

I go Further

The fairies fly away scared,

The Lepercons's go up to me and say" you're not welcomed here , "

I just stand there and look around ,

"I ask why , why am i not allowed here?"

Then the fairies look at me and say," Your a beast a beast of the world unknown.

Now leave go back where you came from."

 

 

          The End ,

 

 

  BY :JENNIFER LITTLE

 

Author's Note

hey I thought this was pretty good ..
I really could turn my poem into really cool awsome storie ..
what do you think

i edited and rewrote this poem i fixed the grammer and spellimng

Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

I'd like to read that story! Always the outsider... Seems like poets are like that.

[ATG]

A very good poem. It was very interesting and the imagery was well done. This seems more like an idea for a story though. I think you could take the core concept of this poem and expand it into a story of some sort. Perhaps involving some old legends.

[Thea]

Very interesting...There's such beauty behind this simple poem...Great work...And I agree with the author's note, this could be a story...
:)))

[misscb]

Yes you could definitely turn it into a story... Well described... Well done!!!

[Marie]

Yes, it could turn into a story. You could describe this beautiful, magic world and then tell of the beast not being allowed into it.