Shadow's Of The Valley Of Death

this poem is basically about a black figure that wouldnt let you go by unless you belived in god and you had a bible with you to move forward and see the bright light which was god .

    

          As we walk through the shadow's of the valley of death, 

        We see a shadow appear.

        What is it?

        So we go closer adn closer,

        A really big figure appear's ,

       I wanted to go further,

       But the black figure wouldn't let me.

       All my friends that went to church , and had their bible's were aloud to pass through,

And see the bright figure that was God ,

And i was left standing there all alone and wasnt allowed to pass by.

   

       The End ,

 

 

 

 

by : jennifer little

Author's Note

i do not want people trying to take my work i spend lot's of time on my work and think and spend the time before i write it so please please just read and enjoy do not copy please and thank you ......

Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

Something bleak here... And yet... Something sacred too.
God does not abandon those who keep His word with all their hearts.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[jennifer little]

let me know what you think
i say this is a cool poem