dark betrayal

around, 

all around, 

the dark memories have gathered, 

as my dread grows in the stroke of death, 

that falls against my naked soul, 

 it slays me within, 

the darkness of my life's blood drips unto the cold and dark uncaring tombstones, 

in my time of madness, 

i shall beg for forgiveness while my doom surrounds me, 

now i'm all alone, 

my soul has fallen into darkness, 

as the darkened eyes have arose, 

this is my doom

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[Writergurl]

the darkness of my life's blood drips unto the cold and dark uncaring tombstones,
in my time of madness,
i shall beg for forgiveness while my doom surrounds me,
now i'm all alone,
my soul has fallen into darkness,

WOW!! Love this part, I feel this way at times with my depression
I can feel the weakness and sadness through out this write,
very nicely expressed

[jennifer little]

thank you a whole lot for the nice review