mysterious forest

i wanna run on top of the tree tops, 

oh how their up so high, 

i am very found of the mysterious woods to have fun, 

needing a nice cold drink on a summer scorching day, 

everything is scolding hot, 

on this hot summer day, 

a tree oh so big, 

the beautiful sun is shining oh so bright, 

there's a surprise, 

upon the high level waters that's overflowing, 

if i could pass, 

i would enter, 

i look over yonder and see this hyper girl, 

she was as hyper as can be, 

she was not a familiar face from around here, 

no one knows who she is, 

or where she came from

Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

Meeting a mysterious stranger... Perhaps she is a forest fairy. A dryad or nymph even. My ancestors believed all manner of spirits haunted the woods. Nicely done.

[Writergurl]

This is such a wonderful little write here,
nicely expressed....