storm brewing in

darkness brewing in the skies, 

could a storm be a coming? 

did we call for some rain? 

the skies are darkening around us as we speak, 

dont know whats going on, 

until it hits, 

there's a storm a coming, 

a big one as that, 

thunder is approaching as lightning strikes the skies, 

winds are a brewing, 

hail is setting in, 

time to take cover, 

until it's all over

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Your lines are apprehension filled. They also are a good metaphor. Nice little read Jennifer.

Chris

[jennifer little]

thank you so much ill review some of your work