Saving my soul!

just a poem i created a second version of this poem let me know if you like the first version or second version

first version 

               My heart was filled with darkness, 

        My soul was filled with hurt, 

            and pain, 

        The suffering tour me down, 

        The darkness took control of my mind and soul, 

        Satan had a hold of me, 

        Until the day i woke up, 

         I came home, 

        Long journey i traveled home, 

       God saved my soul, 

        Lord Thy God thank you for saving my soul

    second version 

  saving my soul  

    my heart filled with darkness, 

is it to late? 

soul full of hurt, 

pain, 

and suffering, 

suffering tour you down, 

darkness took control of your mind and soul, 

satan had a hold of me, 

until the day i woke up, 

i came home, 

it was a long journey i have traveled, 

God saved my soul, 

lord thy God thank you for saving my soul