tears i cried

just a poem i created a second version let me know if you like the first or second better

          

      first version 

                  All the tears i cried, 

                  All the pain i been through, 

                   And sorrows, 

                  Their all washed away, 

                  For the Glory of God, 

                  Healed my broken heart, 

                  He took away the pain, 

                  The suffering, 

                   The sorrows, 

                   And all the regret, 

                   All the hurt, 

                   No more pain 

   second version 

  tears i cried, 

   tears, 

tears everywhere, 

all the pain i've been through, 

all the sorrows, 

their all washed away, 

for the glory of God i am saved, 

he healed my broken heart, 

he took away the pain, 

the suffering is all gone, 

no more regrets, 

all the sorrows are washed away, 

all the regret is faded away, 

all the hurt is gone, 

no more pain, 

for all the tears i cried God has plan for me

Author's Note

poems i write about my past my regret and other things hope everyone enjoys reading my poems and stories also books

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Faith is believing in something not seen and you did just that. You placed your life in the hands of a living God and he comforted you and brought you out of the state of mind of imprisonment from your pain and sorrow. At last, you found freedom!

[Ngawang Tibet]

Why do you believe in God instead of yourself?

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this it’s quite uplifting x

[andrew mitchell]

I think the second line should be" I've been" apart from that it is soul nourishing to have faith in what you believe, a nice write.

[Carina Baumert]

they're all washed away

[barleygirl]

This is a heartfelt description of what God's friendship means in your life. I prefer spiritual writing like this instead of a preachy message about how we should all act a certain way or believe a certain thing. Here, you SHOW instead of tell -- a good way to share a message to lure people to discover how this healing, soothing presence in your life helps you. Personal stories make for the best inspirational writing. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Ren Nightshade]

Well I'm glad you found peace and comfort in the Lord's hands!

[Nariko]

simple and touching poem. It personally brought a lot memories back in my mind and how much I grew from my pain

[Jay]

Pain, I think that's a universal language that we all understand. Sometimes its finding what to do with it that's the hardest part, I think what you did is definitely an option that not too mamanmamany people turn to, glad you did because now we have this to reflect on too.

[Chris Shaw]

I am happy that your beliefs helped you deal with your sorrow. That is when I wish I had been able to persevere with mine. Just some minor edits here

All the pain I've been through
They're all washed away

All good wishes

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

makes me think of an old song by Ocean..."put your hand in the hand" ....very expressive write...4th line should be "they're" ----but a comforting feeling to this.

j.