my shopping list while pregnant

my shopping list while pregnant

A Poem by jennifer little
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another funny poem i created a second version of this poem let me know what you think do you like the first version or second better

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first version
Oh Goody,
Oh joy,
I found out i was pregnant,
And now this is my shopping list,
All i want is,
Goodies,
Sweets ,
Cracker Jacks,
Apple pie,
Chocolate pudding,
Snickers ice cream ,
Caramel apples,
Strawberries pie,
Sugary drinks,
Now that's my shopping list



second version

my shopping list while pregnant

oh goody,
oh my,
just found out i was expecting,
and now i am having lots of cravings,
all i want is,
goodies,
sweets,
cracker jacks,
apple pie,
chocolate pudding,
snickers,
icecream,
caramel apples,
sugary drinks,
and of course salad,
healthy food as well,
hats the end of this shopping list


© 2022 jennifer little


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jennifer little
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Haha you shopping list sounds like my average day cravings! Eat them up cause they're delish...though I don't think chocolate is that good. I'll let it slide since it was a craving *I'm joking* hahaha!!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


I get the thrust of this but, never having been pregnant myself you will understand, my experience of being with those 'with child' is that their cravings are much more exotic or bizzare. My mother wanted to suck coal (explains a lot), others have wanted abnormal items like metal (coins, etc) clay, coal, soil, chalk, paper, soap, or ash, or an abnormal appetite for some things like raw food ingredients (e.g., flour, raw potato, raw rice, starch, ice cubes, salt). If this last more than a month it is called a pica. Although some women do crave sweet or starchy foodstuffs (hence weight gain!) your list reads like my Friday night shop pour moi!

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Posted 5 Years Ago


jennifer little

5 Years Ago

thanks for the review
i really didnt have any cravings other than dr. peper french fries and.. read more
The best thing about good writing is that it's based on self-honesty. That's what other people relate to, becuz we are all experiencing similar s**t in life. This poem shows a refreshing perspective of self-honesty. Sometimes it's tiring to read stuff that's all serious or sentimental (for me, anyway). I like your humor & how you express yourself in an uninhibited way (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is my kind of list to shop for and I'll never have to worry being pregnant but I will get an expanded waistline...
Oh well it would be worth it 😊

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Posted 5 Years Ago


It's strange how some women get some weird cravings while pregnant. Good poem. That made me smile.

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Posted 5 Years Ago


jennifer little

5 Years Ago

honestly when i was pregnat i only craved few things and non was that on that list i just figured th.. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

I know what you mean thou.
You forgot the pickled gherkins to dip into the snickers ice cream - a delightful humorous write and a great light read - well done and congratulations! :-)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Hmmm, my shopping list used to look like that. It all came to a screeching halt after my double by pass surgery. Now my shopping list looks like...broccoli.
I love your sense of humor.
P.S. Don't worry so much about your spelling or grammar, I'm the worst.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Time will come to shed the extra pounds later I say. Running around after the little one should help, meanwhile enjoy the spoiling!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


WE ARE EXPECTING OUR FIRST BABY, SO IT KIND OFF REMINDED ME OF ALL THE THINGS WE SHOPPED FOR N MADE A LIST OF, SWEET N SIMPLE, BROUGHT A SMILE ON MY FACE, ITS A PRETTY OLD NOW, I M LATE OVER HERE TO READ IT, I HOPE BABY IS DOING GREAT :).. KEEP WRITING N DON'T BE UPSET ABOUT LIFE, ITS JUST LIKE THAT ALWAYS :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


jennifer little

6 Years Ago

thanks for the commet
lol,i need to come for a visit

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on December 30, 2016
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hi im jen i am a single mother of one daughter . i struggle from ptsd depression and anxiety . from being in abusive realationships . i enjoy the outdoors , nature swimming fishing camping boat.. more..

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