Wilderness rains

its just another love poem hope you like it there is two versions let me know if you like the first or second one better

    first version 

    Walking through the wilderness rains, 

So much to explore , 

So little time ,

Oh baby come join me, 

Let's take a walk through the wilderness rains, 

Let's dance upon the stars, 

Kiss upon the moon light , 

Lay upon the midnight stars , 

For ever i love you , 

For ever i will stay, 

Let's take this walk , 

For a journey we will find. 

     second version 

 wilderness rains, 

 as i walk through the wilderness rains, 

so much to explore, 

so little time, 

oh baby come join me, 

lets walk through the wilderness rains, 

lets dance upon the moonlight, 

lay with you in the midnight stars, 

forever i will love you, 

forever i will stay, 

lets take this walk, 

for our journey has just begun 

Author's Note

let me know what you think
now rude commets

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Wilderness rains, that's so beautiful. Thanks for sharing your poem with me.

[Sarah Nicole Nadler]

It’s a great theme and a beautiful image.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Nice poem with an intimate atmosphere. I enjoyed the scenery.

[zero binty]

A meetup with a lover under the rain is one of the greatest joys in life. Provided they enjoi it also and don't b***h about being wet and complainy.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Walks with your lover are what's best...enjoyed this one...

[Aprille]

my first review for a long time. this poem of yours is just beautiful, so beautiful that I'm missing the wilderness even more. For someone who was born and raised on the mountains, the city sucks. Thanks for sharing. ;) -olive.

[Coyote Poetry]

Best walks into deep forest or large mountain range.
"For ever i will stay,
Let's take this walk ,
For a journey we will find. "
I liked the above lines. Good to have company in the walk to the free forest. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily]

I love the ending!
Keep it up!!

[Inject Positivity]

Sweet! There is nothing like love under rain... It's a beautiful way to describe or announce the Poet's love for her beloved... Excellent...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[wordman]

well it sounded like a sweet love song,dancing on the moon and stars

[jennifer little]

thanks hope you enjoyed it