Vampire's

Vampire's

A Poem by jennifer little
"

Vampire poem hope you like it

"

    first version 


Vampire's lurking the night sky,

Looking for souls to steal,

They want your blood,

They want your soul,

They want to steal you away,

Vampire's like to play,

Play head games,

They are very seductive,

They lust upon your deep dark blood,

They thirst upon your blood,

SO if your out at night,

You better watch your back 


     second version 

  vampires

vampires lurking the night sky, 

looking for souls to steal, 

they want your soul, 

they want to steal you away in the darkest of the night, 

vampires like to play, 

playing head games is always fun, 

very seductive, 

they lust upon your deep dark blood, 

better be careful, 

going out at night, 

you better watch your back

© 2022 jennifer little


Author's Note

jennifer little
hope you like this poem
let me know if you like the first version or the second version better

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i like it, feel like there's more to be said, here, then again i might just be over analyzing the piece.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


'Play head games'
That part makes my hair stand up!
Well done, Keep it up!

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Posted 10 Years Ago


I've seen WAY to much vampire themed entertainment by default cause my girl's a vampire fanatic. Decent enough poem though.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


a poetic warning i think, sounds like you know all the vampire rules Jen, have you got inside info :)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Short and to the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Dark fun and very entertaining. Bravo.................

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Great poem :) Enjoyed it even more as I was watching Van Helsing whilst reading it, Great work!

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Really enjoyed, Now I will not go alone at night anywhere lolz,
Good work, keep it up

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Again, this was fun to read :)
The way you describe vampires and their actions is amazing. "Vampires" is definitely a different concept to write on. I'd love to learn it :p
Though I think you meant mind games?

Nice try :)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Pretty straightforward prose! Strong warning- nothing mellow about it :)
Dud you mean 'mind games' ?

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Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 25, 2014
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jennifer little
jennifer little

jackson, MI



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hi im jen i am a single mother of one daughter . i struggle from ptsd depression and anxiety . from being in abusive realationships . i enjoy the outdoors , nature swimming fishing camping boat.. more..

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