dark rose!

dark rose!

A Poem by jennifer little
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just a dark poem i wrote !

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     first version 

 

 

     There's twelve red rose's that stands together,

Their holding on strong,

From the weather that has pasted us by,

Left by his sorrow,

He will always love her,

In the darkest hour,

Love has passed us by,

The light was to never shine again,

All hope was lost,

Our sorrows are weeping,

As the rose's turn dark,

We lay hopelessly in love,

Living day by day,

We lay hopelessly in fear and darkness,

As the rose's turn so black,

You can't see their beauty no more,

No hope,

All is gone,

In our darkest hour,

The dark rose,

Has stuck again.

Blood shed everywhere,

No one is safe anymore,

Love will never be the same

   second version 


   dark rose, 

there's twelve red rose's that stands together, 

their holding on strong, 

from the weather that has passed us by, 

left by his sorrows, 

he will always love her, 

in the darkest hour, 

love has passed us by, 

the light was to never shine again, 

all hope was lost, 

our sorrows are weeping, 

as the rose's turn dark, 

we lay hopelessly in love, 

living day by day, 

we lay hopelessly in fear and darkness, 

as the rose's turn so black, 

you cant see their beauty no more, 

no hope, 

all is gone, 

in our darkest hour, 

the dark rose, 

has struck again, 

blood shed everywhere, 

nobody's safe anymore, 

love will never be the same

© 2022 jennifer little


Author's Note

jennifer little
well just a dark poem i wrote please tell me what you think

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I like the dark mood in this poem, it is dark... Yet romantic... I like it...

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jennifer little

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hi im jen i am a single mother of one daughter . i struggle from ptsd depression and anxiety . from being in abusive realationships . i enjoy the outdoors , nature swimming fishing camping boat.. more..

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