Dear summer!

a poem to summer !

    first version 

    Dear Summer, 

Where are you?

Dear Summer, 

You keep us warm, 

You let us go swimming, 

You let us play outside, 

Dear summer, 

I love you, 

Your the best of them all, 

Dear summer, 

Your so great, 

Dear summer, 

You bring so much joy, 

Dear summer, 

Your amazing, 

You bring sunshine, 

You are my hero, 

Dear sunshine, 

You bring everything to life, 

You bring happiness to my eyes, 

You allow everything to grow, 

I love you summer and sunshine.

  second version 

 dear summer , 

  dear summer, 

where are you?

dear summer please come back, 

dear summer, 

you keep us oh so warm, 

we get to go swimming, 

and you let us play outside, 

dear summer, 

i love you, 

won't you come back, 

dear summer, 

your oh so great, 

dear summer, 

your oh so great, 

dear summer, 

you bring us so much joy, 

dear summer, 

your oh so amazing, 

you bring us sunshine, 

warmth and happiness, 

you are my hero, 

dear summer, 

please don't go away, 

stay here forever, 

dear sunshine, 

you shine oh so bright, 

you are my hero, 

dear sunshine, 

you bring everything to life, 

you bring happiness to my eyes, 

you allow everything to grow oh so pretty, 

i love you summer, 

i love you sunshine

Author's Note

let me know what you think do you like the first version or second version better