I'd love to meet a alien!

just a cute fun kids poem

   first version 

    I'd love to meet a alien, 

A alien in a spaceship,

A alien who has a fish to drive the spaceship, 

I'd love to meet a alien, 

Oh how it would be so cool, 

Oh how i would ask so many questions, 

I'd love to meet a alien, 

One who is oh so great, 

One who likes to have fun, 

One who likes to dance, 

I'd love to meet a alien, 

One that is blue, 

One that is pink, 

One that is bright green, 

One that's yellow, 

One that's orange, 

One that's red, 

Oh how i'd love to meet a alien. 

   second version 

oh how i'd love to meet an alien 

  have you ever wondered what it would be like to meet and alien, 

i have, 

i'd love to meet an alien, 

a tall alien in a spaceship, 

i'd love to meet an alien, 

a laien who'd have a fish to drive the spaceship, 

i'd love to meet an alien, 

one who is oh so great, 

one of many colors, 

one who likes to have fun, 

a friendly alien, 

one who likes to dance, 

i'd love to meet an alien, 

one that is blue, 

mabe even pink, 

yellow, 

green, 

orange, 

or even red, 

oh how i'd like to meet an alien 

Author's Note

let me know what you think
i changed the name for the second version
do you like the first version or second one better

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

interesting..........!!!
people always depict aliens as bad but i guess they could also be fun, like superman!
well written!!
sweet innocent poem!
i liked it!!!
:)
quick query : shouldn't it be 'an alien' instead of 'a alien'.

[jennifer little]

well thanks for the review well i did it as a kids poem but im sure if there are real aliens and there could be a lot of people say they are but they say that they are pretty mean and scary

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome........there is a kid in all of us!! :) :)