Hell is a real place!

just a poem i wrote about Hell cause its a real place !

    Have you ever heard about Hell?

  Have you ever seen Hell?

Have you heard of Heaven?

Have you ever seen Heaven?

I seen both in dreams, 

But i can imagine that Hell will be a lot worse than what you see in dreams, 

And Heaven will be a lot better than what you see in your dreams, 

Your a soldier of God, 

You use to follow him, 

Why did you stop?

God was your only hope, 

Your only chance to forgiveness and to live a great life, 

You turned your back on him, 

You cursed his name, 

You slander his name, 

You thought it was all a game, 

You said oh there's no God, 

I only believed that when i went to church, 

But you use to love him and believe in him, 

What happened?

You blame the Christians, 

They hurt you and put you down, 

They ridiculed you, 

Slandered your name, 

Then you started giving up hope, 

Now you have died, 

You are facing life in Hell, 

Bet you weren't expecting that,

You were a soldier of God, 

You turned your back on him, 

Now you faced Hell, 

You have gone there, 

You can't ever get out of there, 

The Devil laughs in your face, 

He say's i have won you over your mine now, 

Your my puppet, 

My puppet in Hell, 

I control you, 

You will be tormented for each sin, 

He's laughing in your face, 

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, 

He's saying i have won you over, 

ha ha ha ha ha , 

Your mine, 

You see a big lake of fire, 

For you are scared, 

You didn't think this would happen to you, 

The Devil laughs in your face, 

ha ha ha ha ha, 

He's happy that you have sined, 

He's happy he won you over, 

There's no turning back now, 

For you have sined, 

You get down on your knees and try to pray, 

Oh God please help me, 

What did i do wrong?

The Devil looks at you and laughs again, 

Ha ha ha ha ha, 

You can't get saved once your in Hell, 

For you are my puppet, 

There's fiery hot coals going to go on your flesh, 

Your skins melting away, 

Your living the same life everyday, 

Pain suffering, 

Burning flesh smell, 

Chained up like a dog, 

Hell is a tragic place, 

You can feel the bones crushing you down over and over each day, 

It never stops for you are sentenced there for eternity, 

 You can feel the bugs crawling in your body and out of your body, 

You can feel the worms crawling out of you, 

You can smell your flesh burning away, 

Rotting away, 

You will be punished for each sin that you have committed, 

For now your the Devils slave, 

For Hell is a horrible place for you surely don't want to go there.

Author's Note

Think twice ..
Hell is a real place so think again .. if you think its not ..
thought this might help out some people
but tell me what you think ..

Reviews

[Prabha Salimath]

Nicely written jens yes there is a concept of heaven and hell in mythology.
Indeed, I believe in God but not in separate concept of heaven and hell. God only gives what's in our account so what is done is to be paid on this earth only. Fianlly there is no proof of hell so I can't take it as you said, but ill deed always will be punished. There is no proof for God still I feel him that's why I believe.

[ksscampos]

Although my beliefs are different, I still enjoyed reading this. vivid imagery, well written and good flow. thanks for sharing. I always enjoy reading your material

[stars are far]

yeah, thats scary,though i believe in it but still the thought of it and imagining it is scary , that was very wel written.. good job and hey , thats very effective that you mention it .. well done

[M.A.Rathore]

I agree with Prabhji that the concept of hell and heaven is depicted in our mytholigical books yet there no proof of their existence though man's mind is a place where both the things are found. As for as your creation is concerned it is superb in description of hell. When we were chidren we use to think over the matter and terrified by the statememts made by our elders. I do love it more if would be in stanza form and being a short and concised piece it would be better...thanks inviting for reading this nice piece.
Keep writing but in short ..

[Dark Rose]

I have a feeling I am going to end up using some of the lines. I love it.

[erifnidne]

Nicely written. It definitely has the power to make people think about it. Very grotesque descriptions, I liked it. Wonderful job

[MomzillaNC]

Dark and frightening to even think of the place.

NOTES: This needs to be broken into stanzas, I think.

[Sami Khalil]

This was a powerful write on hell and the expectations in it. Excellent...:)......

[wordman]

damn I get words from god wherever I turn preach on girl