Hell is a real place!

just a poem i wrote about Hell cause its a real place !

    Have you ever heard about Hell?

  Have you ever seen Hell?

Have you heard of Heaven?

Have you ever seen Heaven?

I seen both in dreams, 

But i can imagine that Hell will be a lot worse than what you see in dreams, 

And Heaven will be a lot better than what you see in your dreams, 

Your a soldier of God, 

You use to follow him, 

Why did you stop?

God was your only hope, 

Your only chance to forgiveness and to live a great life, 

You turned your back on him, 

You cursed his name, 

You slander his name, 

You thought it was all a game, 

You said oh there's no God, 

I only believed that when i went to church, 

But you use to love him and believe in him, 

What happened?

You blame the Christians, 

They hurt you and put you down, 

They ridiculed you, 

Slandered your name, 

Then you started giving up hope, 

Now you have died, 

You are facing life in Hell, 

Bet you weren't expecting that,

You were a soldier of God, 

You turned your back on him, 

Now you faced Hell, 

You have gone there, 

You can't ever get out of there, 

The Devil laughs in your face, 

He say's i have won you over your mine now, 

Your my puppet, 

My puppet in Hell, 

I control you, 

You will be tormented for each sin, 

He's laughing in your face, 

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, 

He's saying i have won you over, 

ha ha ha ha ha , 

Your mine, 

You see a big lake of fire, 

For you are scared, 

You didn't think this would happen to you, 

The Devil laughs in your face, 

ha ha ha ha ha, 

He's happy that you have sined, 

He's happy he won you over, 

There's no turning back now, 

For you have sined, 

You get down on your knees and try to pray, 

Oh God please help me, 

What did i do wrong?

The Devil looks at you and laughs again, 

Ha ha ha ha ha, 

You can't get saved once your in Hell, 

For you are my puppet, 

There's fiery hot coals going to go on your flesh, 

Your skins melting away, 

Your living the same life everyday, 

Pain suffering, 

Burning flesh smell, 

Chained up like a dog, 

Hell is a tragic place, 

You can feel the bones crushing you down over and over each day, 

It never stops for you are sentenced there for eternity, 

 You can feel the bugs crawling in your body and out of your body, 

You can feel the worms crawling out of you, 

You can smell your flesh burning away, 

Rotting away, 

You will be punished for each sin that you have committed, 

For now your the Devils slave, 

For Hell is a horrible place for you surely don't want to go there.

Author's Note

Think twice ..
Hell is a real place so think again .. if you think its not ..
thought this might help out some people
but tell me what you think ..

Reviews

[Prabha Salimath]

Nicely written jens yes there is a concept of heaven and hell in mythology.
Indeed, I believe in God but not in separate concept of heaven and hell. God only gives what's in our account so what is done is to be paid on this earth only. Fianlly there is no proof of hell so I can't take it as you said, but ill deed always will be punished. There is no proof for God still I feel him that's why I believe.

[Renée]

Powerful Images, Jen.....

[Jamestry]

Hell is Real and I believe! I pray we don't miss Heaven

[A Soap Mess Stories]

A graphic depiction of what hell will be like...but like you said in your words...I'm sure we can't even begin to imagine how horrific hell will be or how gloriously wonderful heaven will be...we have only our faith and our hope to rely on...great job with this...

[Laura Lynn]

It's true that it is possible for us to do terrible things and it is a warning about such terribleness, what if we experience a hellish experience, what do we do to get away from it. Thanks for taking us through this fiery brimstone always

[Ryan Henderson]

I like this scary, horrific poem, I love your style of writing, Jen's books!

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. I have read Dante's inferno a few times. Hell isn't no fun. I like your description and version of hell. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The Black Warrior]

There is great imagery in this poem. It gave me the chills. And I surely don't want to go there!

~SUK

[Malister Mikey]

Nicely written though as I said in a previous post before, I do not believe in heaven nor hell though I believe in God. I am not one to spend my whole life obsessing of what happens afterwards, I never was a soldier of the god from the bible, because I just can't believe a lot of the stuff in it and never will and Hell does not scare me nor will it ever though that being said I did enjoy the poem.

Sincerely, Malister Mikey

[R Smith]

well i guess that tells us and just to say i'm with you Jen, just keep me out of hell, a great explanation of life after death and a fantastic warning too, great writing :)

[K.N. Thorn]

You wrote and interesting poem. Why do you think so much about Hell?

[jennifer little]

i dont know really i just know that its a real place .. and i dont want to go there .. but i been fasinated with writing about hell and vampire lust poems

[K.N. Thorn]

Interesting topics Jen, I don't believe in them but that's just me.