I dared my brother to eat a spicy pepper!

a cute funny kids poem ! knowing me i probably would of done this to my brother but he wouldn't of been stupid enough to fall for it ...

    

                I dared my brother to eat a spicy pepper, 

      He did, 

It was oh so funny, 

I watch his face pucker up as smoke steamed out of his head, 

His mouth was on fire, 

Call the fire department! 

And it burned all of his hair off, 

Now that was funny, 

   911, 911, 911, 

Help my brothers mouth is on fire, 

  His mouth had erupted like lava, 

His tongue was melting, 

His ears has steam running out of them, 

At least that how he felt, 

   He ran across the room yelling, 

Mom, Mom, Mom , Mom, 

Call 911, 

My mouth , 

My mouth is on fire, 

    He dove right into the freezer, 

Oh how it was so funny, 

   "But" 

Wait a minute that didn't work, 

   He drank two gallons of water, 

Two liters of pop, 

He even chewed on some ice, 

To try to stop the scorching in his mouth, 

     I went to my brother to be funny again, 

I said here drink this it might help, 

It had red pepper , spicy pepper, and some hot sauce in it, 

     He drank it, 

He was hopping up and down, 

Screaming and yelling, 

What did you put in this, 

What is this, 

   I said," mmmm brother , brother," 

I only put some red pepper , and spicy pepper and some hot sauce in your drink,

    He was chasing after me, 

   He was running and running, 

I said, " You cant catch me, 

   

   So finally He sat down and got his own drink, 

  At last it was finally over, 

The burning went away, 

I was laughing so hard, 

I said that pepper was the best dare ever, 

May we please have another one. 

   

Author's Note

now you gotta think this is funny .. tell me you wouldn't do this to your brother come on it would be funny and the best dare- prank ever..

well let me know what you think

Reviews

[Confuser]

I'm still laughing - so vivid. I loved it. Thank you.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[stars are far]

hahahah that was evilllllllllllllllllllllll... because my brother once did that on me, and i cried :P, i still remember omg ahah,,well done prakner :P is there a word called pranker ! hehe

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[Dark Rose]

I love this I want to do this know.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[Sindu]

wow that was mean and funny! but i wouldn't do it if I had a brother (or may be i would) but I cannot same about friends :P
anyways, liked the way you put it. Narration with ups and downs and emoting the poor kid under torture.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[erifnidne]

Very cute. I don't have a brother but that would be quite a something to watch. Nice job 🎃

[jennifer little]

thanks for reviewing

[wordman]

I remember those days and those dares I killed a quart of vodka at 14 then got my a*s beat for doing it of course after I sobered up lol

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review that was my last poem i wrote today so now i gotta go and write some more now... but i thought this one would be a cute and really funny poem to write

[wordman]

and it is funny and cute