Vampire's of the night!

just a poem i wrote

    Creatures, 

Demon's of the night, 

Vampire's looking for souls  to kill, 

They can smell their pray, 

They want to thirst upon your blood, 

If you look into their eyes it will burn so bad it will blind you, 

The pale skin of these creatures, 

With skin so soft, 

Black hair that makes your simmer, 

The curse of really dark blood lips, 

You don't want to meet them, 

For if you do, 

You will surely die.

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Vampires...sinfully lustful...drawing us in whether we want them to or not...well done...

[Ryan Henderson]

Well done! Thank you for sharing!

[The Black Warrior]

Well done, kinda spooky lol

thank you for sharing

[R Smith]

very good Jen, you have a vampire thing going on and you do it really well, love this :)

[Prabha Salimath]

Sweet and simply beautiful. I do enjoyed the Twilight movie series a lot although I don't much about vampires..

[wordman]

a great story and believable