Demons from Hell!

just a poem i wrote poped into my head

    Creatures of the night lurk upon us. 

The demons from Hell, 

Seeing who's souls they can steal, 

They want to drag you to the pits of Hell, 

For you have sined, 

They want you in Hell,

So they can torcher you, 

Laugh at you, 

Eat your soul, 

For you'll never live again, 

You'll die over and over, 

Thrown into a lake of fire, 

Your flesh burning, 

Bugs crawling through your body, 

You'll wish you never sined, 

You'll try to ask for forgiveness, 

The demons laugh at you and say, 

There's no turning back now once you have sined, 

Once you have been dammed to Hell.

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[K.N. Thorn]

Other than you have 'torcher' instead of torture and 'sined' instead of sinned you have a good poem going. I think you could add some more too it but it is very good :)

[Chris]

good nightmares for halloween.

[Asb]

for every sin in the world,,,there will be a punishment...beware...!!
good penning