Great Forest!

just a poem based upon a picture !

   As i walk through the great forest,
I see so many creatures,
I see a willow tree,
There's beautiful flowers everywhere,
I walk a little further,
I see the strangest thing,
There was a mushroom,
It looked oh so weird,
Looked as if it were a space ship,
At the bottom there was a door,
There was also windows,
Oh how it was oh so cool ,
I moved a little closer,
Something had spoken,
In a tiny voice,
It was a little blue space critter,
I thought i was tripping,
So i just took off through the forest,
Everything was oh so colorful,
Then it was the end,
I was back home again,
How did i get there?

Author's Note

well let me know what you think ... Should i turn into a storie ? i think i'm going to ..

Reviews

[K.N. Thorn]

This is a very cute poem, I really enjoyed it. Very imaginative and full of imagery. You are a such a creative person. :)

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review do you think i should turn it into a storie though

[K.N. Thorn]

that would be really cool too and you could open it with that poem. :)

[jennifer little]

yea would be cool

[K.N. Thorn]

an alien alice in wonderland.... hmm very trippy ;)