I see the sadness in your eye's !

just a poem on a little how i kind of feel but not all of it is true about myself !

   I can feel your pain, 

I can see your sadness in your eyes, 

You hide your shame, 

Let's hit the bar, 

Let's get drunk and drink our sorrows away, 

Let's take another hit of weed, 

Let's snort some more s**t, 

Our pain will sure to fade away soon, 

Your sadness in your eye's isn't hard to see, 

You try to hide your shame, 

But what have you done, 

Nothing right, 

You feel as if everyone is staring at you, 

You feel as if everyone hates you, 

SO why not, 

Why not just drink our sorrows away right, 

The pain wont last for long, 

Let's hide away, 

Lock our self's away, 

Can't trust no one, 

SO much hatred, 

SO much pain, 

Just wanna hide away forever. 

Author's Note

let me know what you think !

Reviews

[Nikki]

This is the best of your work I have read yet! :) If only numbing the pain made it go away. Everyone handles things differently, I'm sure what works for some may not for others. My personal method of numbing is forgetting and for that I am incredibly thankful for my horrible memory. lol. :/ Both a good and bad thing.. Which I hate and love.. I digress, great read. >< Sorry so long.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[Nikki]

You're welcome.