Tormented souls!

well just a poem i wrote !

    I feel as if the world is falling down, 

Tormented souls, 

Souls that are lost, 

No hope, 

No dreams, 

The sky's are so grey, 

You met your match, 

You don't know what to do, 

Come a little closer, 

And you will see, 

The dark in you, 

Pray for your sins, 

Pray that you wont be lost, 

The world around us is forever lost.

Author's Note

what do you think

Reviews

[Confuser]

I think it's great. Actually, I read it before; maybe my computer froze up; and I didn't comment, but glad, so I could read it again.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[JC]

such a deep feeling of despair and confusion with a bitter darkness, great Halloween read :)

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review and for reading

[Confuser]

.....................No problem/although, I am new, still have much to learn.