Lost !

just a poem i wrote !

   I see in your eye's, 

Your a tormented soul,

The waves come crashing down on you as we speak, 

For you think that everything is lost, 

You been drawn from the deep sea, 

You are lost, 

You feel as your heart has been ripped out, 

You feel as there's no hope for you, 

You feel as if everything is gone, 

Your soul is so tormented, 

You don't know what to do, 

Open your eye's, 

Open your heart, 

Speak your mind, 

Before you are gone for ever more. 

Author's Note

let me know what you think of this poem

Reviews

[JC]

its rough seeing people we love suffer and hope they can find their way back, is frustrating. well done.

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review